Good job on the color description. Remember to write on each posting. The leading (space between sentences) needs to be less. A tighter cohesion of the wording would give this more impact. I like the impact the word "emotion" presents.
Good job on the color description. Remember to write on each posting. The leading (space between sentences) needs to be less. A tighter cohesion of the wording would give this more impact. I like the impact the word "emotion" presents.
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